@Sahilkumar I feel you have written one of a good essay that can fetch you very good marks provided...
1. Coherence of thoughts
2. You explained your premise clearly after the introduction
3. Shown optimism and sprinkled good examples.
Because, this is not a topic as straight as Good parenting makes good world.
So, there is lot of scope of creativity and upsc wants that originality.
If we think the topic means motherhood, we feel we are deviated.
But there is no such thing called it means motherhood only, except in English litterature and that too in the annotation of that particular poem.
So, chill.
It's symbolism of unity in diversity shown by UPSC.
