@WolfgangMozart Hi, regarding the content, I have made notes from coaching material and try to link certain points from current affairs where relevant and do simple google search for conclusion points add them to notes. Since you have just started, that's why, you are thinking of these points as very deep ones. Once you start writing, you'll learn to use points you read in common sources (whichever you follow) at relevant places.
Regarding naxalism, I have taken the content from material of Edsarrthi that I had enrolled for.
As far as writing style is concerned, I am still working on it and facing many problems, so, I can't really tell anything about it.
Also add that the rice wheat system - depleting ground water - Punjab haryana subsurface water preservation acts - delayed sowing of kharif crops - delayed harvesting - less time for rabi crops - stubble burning - air poliution in north India
Yes Sir, my answer got focused more on 'monoculture' and not specifically on rice-wheat system, I noticed it after I wrote. Working on it.
Problem of obesity, type 2 diabestes capital of the world
Couldn't think on these lines. Need to connect dots substantially more.
Thankyou so much@Neyawn Sir for having a look at it.
@Dialectics Hey! Thanks for the suggestion. Will work on it. Thanks for having a look at it.
