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Mains 2021 Result declared - In or Out?

So Mains 2021 has begun. Essay Paper is here

1. https://blog.forumias.com/upsc-ias-mains-2021-essay-question-paper/


2. GS Paper 1 : https://blog.forumias.com/download-upsc-ias-mains-2021-gs-1-question-paper

3. GS Paper 2 : https://blog.forumias.com/download-upsc-ias-mains-2021-gs-2-question-paper 






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How was your paper? How did you approach the paper?

root,Neyawnand26 otherslike this
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The motherly angle is the conventional interpretation, no doubts there. But, that one has many issues in the present tense, like it's the mother's job to look after the child, It was written from a man's viewpoint, patronising/condescending....

So, new dimensions are for the better, may be. Don't know. Again, why take a chance, when there are other topics without any doubtful interpretations?

chamomile,
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In this essay on hand  that rocks the cradle

I didnt cover about motherhood( didn't even think for a second about motherhood) 

I focussed on issues of vulnerable sections like farmers, climate refugees, environmental etc,

wrote from governance and administration view. 

Interpreted the term hand as a nation .. Those nations whichnurture(interpreted it from cradle)their citizens and their needs can rule the world on developmental parameters. 

Started with darwin struggle for existence and survival of fittest. For survival of any Nation or an individual, it is important to recognize their needs and ensure their development, otherwise civil war and ultimately society will get collapsed. For this, nurturing of all citizens is important. 

Somewhere in between also gave examples of Afghanistan taliban issue, French revolution

I guess I deviated a lot and wrote rubbish


chamomile,Newton981and2 otherslike this
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If I am not wrong "The hand that rocks the cradle" was an essay topic in some previous paper as well.. I don't remember the year..
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I too gave it different  meanings. I dont know how UPSC will interpret. 

Wrote only  2 3  pages on motherhood but then a included 

America  as cradle of modern democracy and how it shaped the world order towards democracy and that is why it ruled/maintained  hegemony in the world 

Then how during drafting of Univeral Declaration of  Human Rights,cradle of human rights, the words All men are born free equal was changed to All humans are born free equal by Indian delegate Ms Hansa Mehta.In this way she rocked the cradle of human rights by making it gender sensitive and such inclusiveness exists in UN now.

Then referred to Parliament as cradle of laws and how it affects society and rules in spirit of constitution. 

Also referred to Gandhiji rocking cradle of independence through ideas of non violence and how it still shapes India's policy.

Then gave arguments on how hands r not able to rock cradle and not ruling the world.

High malnutrition anaemia among women

Lack infrastructure in schools hindering teachers

Farmers cradle of food security facing challenges 

Then wrote about hands that build the cradle, cleans the cradle and keeps it safe.They too r important not just hands rocking the cradle 

Then last argument was about how world should be ruled is more important than who rules the world.It must be ruled with values of justice and compassion. 


chamomile,plmokn25688524and1 otherslike this
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@Sahilkumar first of all you didnt write rubbish. two, you are getting above average in this essay for exploring more points (dimensions) and thinking out of the box. 
i just in hope that while explaining taliban, you stuck to the demand by explaining who is the hand who is the cradle.
US invaded, cradle is central asia. rocks is destablising the region. If you are writing in a way that demand is justified, no issue. 
likewise while explaining on vulnerable sections, hope you actualy wrote in a way that hand, cradle , rock and rules the world is justified. Hope you didnt leave it open ended.

chamomile,
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@Sahilkumar If u have explained the words-
hands,rock the cradle,rules for each example, there wont be any problem. If it is so,it would be rewarded as points are unique. 


chamomile,
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I respect the views of all aspirants..

But I would like to add my 2 cents to the discussion on the essay..

The core demand of the essay should always be addressed... Dimensions should revolve around the core theme..

If the topic is on motherhood..then that forms the crux of the essay.. various dimensions about motherhood adds value and not anything under the sun..


PS.. I have not written this topic n I don't claim myself to be a good essay writer.. but what I said above is my understanding..


Akkku,Animesh_Mathsand2 otherslike this
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@Declared_Dead I agree with you. But ill choose to be optimistic here. Reason being its not board exam where you write whats in ncert. your own test of understanding is all tested. 
But then again, if the quote was indeed on motherhood and needed an essay to revolve around motherhood, then definetly those who went in a roundabout manner are in trouble.
But muje lagta nai h ki UPSC marks kaatne ke lie baithi h. 
maine toh history repeats itself me bhot kam actual events ke bare me bataya h. but 2page intro jisme event tha aur ab fir wahi ho rha h, isme samajh aata h ki demand samajh aa gayi hai. baki toh dimensions explore karna hoga. nahi toh fir hame har historical event (jo actually hue the) unko pehle tragedy batake farce ke taraf le jana hoga. fir toh band baj jayegi kyunki ye toj 1200 marks ke gs ka answer ho jayega.
in the same way motherhood wala bhi. likewise is logic se main sare essays me ye keh sakta hu. 
thats why im optimistic and saying that demand sirf ek ho nai sakti. demand quote ke anusaar hona chayiye and justified bas.


chamomile,Newton981and2 otherslike this
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If I am not wrong "The hand that rocks the cradle" was an essay topic in some previous paper as well.. I don't remember the year..

Yes I saw it in Mrunal's PYQs 

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I respect the views of all aspirants..

But I would like to add my 2 cents to the discussion on the essay..

The core demand of the essay should always be addressed... Dimensions should revolve around the core theme..

If the topic is on motherhood..then that forms the crux of the essay.. various dimensions about motherhood adds value and not anything under the sun..


PS.. I have not written this topic n I don't claim myself to be a good essay writer.. but what I said above is my understanding..


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like in afghanistan i wrote how usa and other powers in pursuing their self interest destabilised the region resulting emergence of taliban. taliban can't rule by coercion or legitimise its rule unless it recognises the needs of vulnerables like women and other ethnic communities.
in french case i wrote how church ruling was overthrown by society as it created stratification and how ideals of french revolution equality liberty fraternity still guiding the other nations like adopted by our own constitution.
in economic aspect, explained though we have improved our ranking in ease of doing business but still lagging in world human capital index. we cannot aspire for $20trillion economy unless we solve the issues of unemployment low skills education issues etc. 


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If I am not wrong "The hand that rocks the cradle" was an essay topic in some previous paper as well.. I don't remember the year..

2005 


chamomile,Philip_Marlowe
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If I am not wrong "The hand that rocks the cradle" was an essay topic in some previous paper as well.. I don't remember the year..

2005 


I believe the cradle topic is essentially about women empowerment..

Rest.. the upsc in its wisdom may decide otherwise..


pavankhade08617,sjerngaland1 otherslike this
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@Sahilkumar bhai ab pata nai. saaf saaf likha hoga pages fill kie honge aur justify kia hoge jitne bhi dimensions likhe hain toh ho jayega


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That topic is about motherhood, and you can write about women empowerment in general too, but anything beyond that may be a risky gamble.
Animesh_Maths,krishna96and1 otherslike this
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If I am not wrong "The hand that rocks the cradle" was an essay topic in some previous paper as well.. I don't remember the year..

2005 


Funny how they have combined both the essay topics of 2005 into one essay topic in 2021...

Animesh_Maths,krishna96and2 otherslike this
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Earlier I was worried how much I've messed up my essay topic "The hand that rocks the cradle..." Now I think I was too hard on myself xD 
chamomile,Villanelleand7 otherslike this
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If I am not wrong "The hand that rocks the cradle" was an essay topic in some previous paper as well.. I don't remember the year..

2005 


Funny how they have combined both the essay topics of 2005 into one essay topic in 2021...

Good observation

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How have you guys interpreted "The hand that rocks the cradle rules the world."? Motherhood and nurturing the child or women empowerment in general?

I wrote about women empowerment. But focussing on "rule the world". So my essay talks about powerful women in different walks of life and different dimensions to that.

Retrospectively sound really really silly considering how most people have interpreted it. Could very easily be my undoing in this cycle unfortunately ://

EiChan,plmokn25688524and2 otherslike this
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Hope upsc takes liberal interpretation.otherwise biggest blunder done in essay.

Rocks the cradle symbolises nurturing. It can be by anyone and of anyone not necessarily by woman and or a child

chamomile,MarcusAand1 otherslike this
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