Does writing essay for upsc means only describing the essay or we can dig for new meaning, or give contradictory view to essay .
Got poor marks in essay mocks for doing that ,the copy cheker have written not relavant/stick to demand of essay type comment every where.
I don't know what I have done wrong
1) Made the essay unnecessary complex.
2) I lack langauge(articulation)skills to convince the reader to my narrative.
3 ) The reader,reading the essay is searching for some fixed format or trying to earn more money by giving only a cursory reading .
Essay score 130 in 2016,Essay 135 in 2017(I thought these marks were due to my handwriting illegible at times,spelling and grammar error )
Essay 103 in 2018(wrote a one sided essay showing contemt for indian culture in customary morality topic).
Writing mains after 2 year drops and 1 csat negligence.
Anybody with good essay marks or improvement over time please reply .