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Questions
1) Analyze the government’s push to facilitate international trade in domestic currency.
2) Urban pollution is a complex problem in India that involves a multitude of factors. In light of the statement, discuss the ways to improve air and water quality in urban spaces.
Plz review..
Very nice! Content is good, structure is proper. Some suggestions:
– Add more points under reasons for air pollution like construction etc. You can also mention contribution of each factor like transportation (SOX, NOX), Construction (PM2.5 etc)
– Similarly in solutions, add promotion of public transport (BRTS/MRTS) to curb vehicular pollution etc.
Overall good attempt!
Ok maam/sir, i will work on it..
Thankyou..
Please review and let me know my mistakes
Good answer! There is some margin for improvement. The question statement mentions urban pollution is complex problem with multitude of factors. So ideally, You should focus on the multitude of reasons behind air and water pollution. It is good to include harmful impacts, You can show them in a flowchart to save on words/time.
Suggestions are good and appropriate. You can classify them under air/water pollution sub-sections.
Okay noted! Thanku the review
Please review
Great answer! Measures related to addressing water pollution seem lacking like You could have included sewage/effluent treatment plants etc. Classifying measures (air/water/common) could help.
Try not to leave any point unexplained e.g., smart cities You can add some feature of smart cities that addresses the problem of pollution.
Overall nice!
Answer is good, fairly comprehensive content with proper structure.
Seems a bit long, You can cut down a bit. Introduction can be more pointed, simply mention the facts, the generic statement can be avoided.
Similarly, initiatives of Government can be shown as a diagram to cut down the content.
Some other points can be added in initiatives like public transport infra etc.
I have written it as a 15 marks (250 words) answer.
Review mine Sir
I have written domestic currency qn Sir . Please review mine
Pls review