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Instructions: Write an essay on any one of the following in about 1000-1200 words.

Time : 90 minutes

Marks : 125


1. Humility is not cowardice. Meekness is not weakness.

2. It’s dangerous when people are willing to give up their privacy.


How to get high scores in Essay Paper, by Arushi Sharma (RANK 292, CSE-2015)


 

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ForumIAS
ForumIAS
8 years ago

Start writing the Essay now. And, do review each other’s answers.

Vikram kumar
Vikram kumar
8 years ago
Reply to  ForumIAS

Hindi me bhi likh skte hai

InDiAn
InDiAn
8 years ago
Reply to  Vikram kumar

Yes..

Jyoti Singh
Jyoti Singh
8 years ago

Humility is not cowardice. Meekness is not weakness.—–

In today’s commercial world the cardinal virtues seem to have no place. Every value is fixed by the influence of STATUS or financial and social power seems to top the dominant values of today’sculture.When we think of traits leaders typically exhibit, many come to mind–including strength, charisma, enthusiasm, and vision.

Two important component is often overlooked: humility and Meekness
In the eyes of most of the modern people, humility is the character of a coward.Being humble doesn’t mean being a chump On the other Hand.Meeknes include “enduring injury with patience and without resentment,” lacking self-assurance,” gentle, mild, “deficient in spirit and courage,” “submissive,” “not violent or strong,” “moderate,” “easily imposed on.

Humility comes in many forms–MOTHER TERESA chose to give up her life in that convent in order to live with the poorest of the poor on the streets of Calcutta, taking care of the very sick and dying. She took care of people with whom no one else wanted to bother.Her humility is evident in that she never draws attention to herself, is not afraid to dig in and do the hard work of serving others, and never boasts of her accomplishments

Humility is the foundation of all virtues – Humilty is a choice, you have achieved a lot and possibly horded a lot of wares but you decide not to flaunt them because you have the capacity to empathize with the masses who are yet to achieve or their circumstances make it difficult for them achieve them as of now. That choice to not
brag is humility.

BE OPEN TO OTHERS’ OPINIONS –Humble leaders seek input from others to ensure they have all the facts and are making decisions that are in the best interest of the team. No one person has all the answers. If you think you do, then it’s probably time to reassess.People want to work for people who value their opinions rather than ignore or dismiss them. Effectively humble leaders are comfortable asking for input and can just as easily be decisive when the situation calls for it.
For Example–When Bill was given a lifetime achievement award, he accepted it with great humility, thanking God and the people in his life for making his work possible.

TEND TO OTHERS’ NEEDS-team performance is typically much higher when team members
believe their leaders are truly looking out for their best interests. That doesn’t mean hand-holding, but it does mean caring about the environment in which your team is working and ensuring that they have
what they need to do a good job.While intelligence and skill are typically good predictors of team performance, the quality of humility—especially in a team’s leadership—can be a better performance predictor.

ADMIT MISTAKES It’s tough to be more transparent and open—even those who consider themselves humble don’t want to look like they’ve messed up. But, as human beings we all make mistakes. When you’re willing to share your own missteps, and how you dealt with and recovered from them, you earn trust from your team
For Example–Kelly insisted that she was right and Julie was wrong in front of the whole class. When it was proven that Julie was right and Kelly was wrong, Kelly received a lesson in humility.

ACCEPT AMBIGUITY Many leaders want to control everything. But some things can’t be known up
front or beforehand. You have to know when to take charge—or when to let go and not try to force everything to go your way, he says.Sometimes,it’s important to admit that you don’t know the best answer, and wait
until you have the best information to make a decision or change, Grow says.

SELF-REFLECT Like many leadership skills, humility may not come easy to everyone. That’s why it’s important to engage in self-reflection.By chronicling what went well during your interactions or what you could have handled better, you can enhance your perspective and learn from your actions
For Example–Even though Kate Middleton married into British royalty, she still likes to do her own grocery shopping and cooking

When people are demonstrating these behaviors—self-awareness, perspective, openness to feedback and ideas, and appreciation of others

Humility as the knowledge of your limits, good and bad. A humble person will realize that they are not all knowing and cannot be “all doing” and don’t have an issue with constructive criticism or reaching out to others for assistance.
Anything else on a secular level, would consider arrogance/pride.People who practice this tend to lack respect for others, minimizing their efforts and input. Because of this, they also have a tendency to
be out of step with their environment at the same time that they believe themselves to be in full control of it.

Terrorists focus their attacks on the defenseless people of the world. If they do attack someone that can fight back, they are usually out of sight,that shows how coward people will act

On The other hand Who would forget DR BHIM RAO AMBEDKAR;s Long Life Struggle and Problems he faced due to caste discrimination throughout his earlier days he faced all these things with utmost confidence and come out as winner but this does not implies he has this MEEKNESS Feeling.But Indicates MICKNESS IS THE STRENGTH.

Meekness is a fruit of the Spirit, it denotes having a mild temperament. Someone who is meek is not quick to become angry, irritated, or impatient.Meekness also involves humility. This does not mean thinking you are unworthy or undeserving. It does not mean letting others run over you. Humility bows its knee to the King of Kings and Lord of Lords. That means embracing all God has said in His Word.

For Example–A woman started a non-profit when was 22, and has been given numerous awards for her work over the last 20 years. Even though she is in charge of a lot of people, her humility is evident in that she never draws attention to herself, is not afraid to dig in and do the hard work of serving others,and never boasts of her accomplishments. It Does Not indicate she has this MEEKNESS FEELING about Her Achievement.Thus Meekness is not weakness It is power under control

Meekness” is a humble attitude that expresses itself in the patient endurance of offenses.He who is slow to anger is better than the mighty, and he who rules his spirit, than he who captures a city. In contrast, the individual who is not gentle is likened to “a city that is broken into and without walls.Gentleness always uses its resources appropriately, unlike the out-of-control emotions that so often are destructive and have no place
in your life as a believer.

Meekness is a path worth following. It may not lead you to a spot on INDIAN IDOL or IGT you may not win a political campaign, but you’ll find the reward of God is yours in abundance. “Blessed are the gentle, for they shall inherit the earth

The alternative to Being MEEK and HUMBLE would be DOMINEERING,ARROGANT and PIG HEADED .

Being MEEK and HUMBLE means that person understands wht his limits are and that he does not know or understand all and that is for example only way to develop.Persons who thinks he is all knowing does not see any reason to get better and that can prevent him improving.So MEEK and HUMILITY is beneficial for getting better.

PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
8 years ago
Reply to  Jyoti Singh

you have got some important point , i did really like the acceptance part i did make it my blue print but overlooked and forgot to write it

Mustafa Ali
Mustafa Ali
8 years ago
Reply to  Jyoti Singh

Body looks good. You can write more in conclusion part. Otherwise, good attempt. Plz review mine.

ForumIAS
ForumIAS
8 years ago
Reply to  Jyoti Singh

There are some good points in your essay like the way u linked meekness to humility,characteristics of humility
But there has been a repetition of points related to humility and the flow of the essay is not very good.
You can show how meekness and humility helps in professional as well as personal life.Then show why they are the traits which are neglected in the current society.
How such qualities can be inculcated etc..These dimensions were not analysed well.

Jyoti Singh
Jyoti Singh
8 years ago
Reply to  ForumIAS

Thanx For The Review Mam…..!!!

PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
8 years ago

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ForumIAS
ForumIAS
8 years ago

Try to cut short on non cooperation example..too many words included there.summarise that in a para.
Where is the explanation of the second part showing meekness is not weakness.please try to analyse both the parts equally.rest is good.

PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
8 years ago
Reply to  ForumIAS

thank you sir will try to improve ,

PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
8 years ago

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Knil
Knil
8 years ago

you have excellently covered the aspect of privacy related to data but i feel you could explore some more aspects to add a nice depth to the essay

PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
8 years ago
Reply to  Knil

thanks for the review lgbt issue could have been added. if anything else do let me know .

Mustafa Ali
Mustafa Ali
8 years ago

Introduction; you didn’t define privacy but privacy breach, conclusion is good. Plz review mine.

ForumIAS
ForumIAS
8 years ago

Introduction was not very good..why is giving up privacy so dangerous..This needs more analysis..Also try to bring in more dimensions.

PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
8 years ago
Reply to  ForumIAS

will try to improve,

Jyoti Singh
Jyoti Singh
8 years ago

Plzzz Review My Another Essay On The Same Topic…..!!!

Prathibha Talwar
Prathibha Talwar
8 years ago

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ForumIAS
ForumIAS
8 years ago

Introduction could have been better..The quote you mentioned instead of writing it separately you could have included in the essay itself but for intro that quote is not that good.
Try to maintain the flow of the essay.Content and conclusion were good though.overall a good attempt.

Knil
Knil
8 years ago

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PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
8 years ago
Reply to  Knil

transgender point is good . and exceptional
3rd para from last there can be better wording to describe government role rather than mere criticizing
(upsc pro government )
overall a well diversified approach .

Knil
Knil
8 years ago

thank you for your review i agree with your suggestions 🙂

ForumIAS
ForumIAS
8 years ago
Reply to  Knil

Seemed a little bit critical..Could bring in Aadhar issue as it brings in transparency,accountability and government needs information of the citizens but sufficient protection needs to be there..This aspect can be emphasised more..Overall a good attempt.

Knil
Knil
8 years ago
Reply to  ForumIAS

thank you for your review 🙂

Mustafa Ali
Mustafa Ali
8 years ago
Reply to  Knil

Kudos bro. You add some unimaginable dimension to privacy. Simple but good content. Plz review mine.

Anshuman Upadhyay
Anshuman Upadhyay
8 years ago

https://youtu.be/Nmqa0i0X3-Q WHY PEOPLE FAIL IN PRELIMLs? Strategy for prelims 2018

hiddenwarrior
hiddenwarrior
8 years ago

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ForumIAS
ForumIAS
8 years ago
Reply to  hiddenwarrior

The essay seemed to have focussed mainly on humility..Meekness is neglected..Kindly look into it too..content is good..Good attempt.

hiddenwarrior
hiddenwarrior
8 years ago
Reply to  ForumIAS

yes sir….i neglected it….i thought that both are synonyms ..but i was wrong…i will add meekness part too……thnks for review…

worldlywise
worldlywise
8 years ago
Reply to  hiddenwarrior

REVIEW

+VE
-IT WAS NICE READ
-GOOD USE OF PUNCHLINES
-NICE CONTENT

-VE
-IMPROVE HANDWRITING LITTLE BIT
-PRESENTATION CAN BE IMPROVED
-YOU FORGOT “MEEKNESS”

overall good essay.keep writing.

Mustafa Ali
Mustafa Ali
8 years ago

I THINK I HAVEN’T UPLOADED THEM PROPERLY. IT IS IN REVERSE ORDER I.E LAST PAGE IS FIRST, AND FIRST IS LAST. PLZ REVIEW GUYS.comment imagecomment imagecomment imagecomment imagecomment imagecomment image

PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
PRITISH KUMAR PANDA
8 years ago
Reply to  Mustafa Ali

sir you have given the best defination of privacy explained it well with respect to its aspect but you have largely missed out what has been asked . knil has a more diversified approach . i think if you read his essay it will be of help to you .

Mustafa Ali
Mustafa Ali
8 years ago

Thanks a lot bro. That was a quality review.

Knil
Knil
8 years ago
Reply to  Mustafa Ali

the concept of privacy has been well explained but i think you can add more depth to the essay eg of akhlaq in this context is not suitable in this context

Jyoti Singh
Jyoti Singh
8 years ago
Reply to  Mustafa Ali

Hi !!
I Think,You Have Deleted Your Essay…..!!!

Katyayani Singh
Katyayani Singh
8 years ago

Essay-2 please reviewcomment image comment image

worldlywise
worldlywise
8 years ago

REVIEW
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-first always upload upright and readable images
-work on presentation,paragraphing,being concise and need a little more content
-Improve handwriting

+ve
-good attempt

Katyayani Singh
Katyayani Singh
8 years ago
Reply to  worldlywise

i want to know the conntent i have given is it worth the topic? i was little confused about that

Jyoti Singh
Jyoti Singh
8 years ago

It’s dangerous when people are willing to give up their privacy—–

Individual privacy is an important dimension of human life. The need for privacy is almost as old as the human species.
Today,privacy right faces important challenges and troubles for several reasons in a way that the continuation of this sanctuary right is confronted serious threats and plagues.

The development of advanced and modern technologies in the present century and human achievements in these sciences and technology facilities, besides all their own great and positive advantages, make
PEOPLE’s privacy to be violated. It causes the exposure of all people’s lives corners to the public presence and view as though people were living in a glass room. When their lives became apparent before the
public, their privacy was taken from them. Particularly, the speed development and expansion of technologies results in destruction of boundaries and limitations. So, taking care of people’s privacy confronts with serious impediments and challenges.

Social media is designed to share information and we are good citizens doing only lawful things hence have nothing to hide. We are given a free product so that they can collect private data about you to share it with advertisers but people are willingly giving up their “Right to privacy”. Technology has changed the extent of privacy that we can enjoy, people has to accept the reality. Even if we are not using Social media people can share about us our photos on web without our consent. With increasing access to private data, analysis techniques, and increasing computational power can process a private data like Birth date, Birth location, current location about a person and gather sensitive information which should not be in public.

For example Social Security Number of a person: By analyzing a public data set called the “Death Master File,” which contains SSNs and birth information for people who have died.

In many cases, knowing the date and state of an individual’s birth was enough to predict a person’s SSN. If we believe that we are not doing anything wrong and hence don’t have anything to hide then are we fine to share our email address publically it would only reveal to everyone.

how we’ve willingly allowed our privacy to be taken away, and how we might be able to get some of it back

Google apps such as Gmail and Google calendar allow individuals and organizations to bring order to the hectic process of scheduling and communicating.
“When Google first started, it said it would only use that information internally, to get a sense of the things you like and talk about.All that information used to be gathered in a way where you explicitly gave permission, through things like surveys. But Google can easily poke around without seeking permission, and they don’t explain to you how they know what they know

It’s getting increasingly harder NOT to find someone on LinkedIn, Facebook, Twitter or all of the above. Then there’s Myspace and a lot of lesser-known social networking sites. If you use these programs — and you
probably do — chances are pretty good that you give up a lot of your privacy every day, willingly and even happily. Security experts have spent a lot of time ringing the alarm bell over this lately, because bad people can easily take the personal tidbits you post and use it against you, for everything from marketing to blackmail.
Privacy is evaporating because Facebook, Myspace, Twitter and blogs are raising a generation of kids and adults who have no concept of privacy or the ability to truly understand that nothing digital
is ever forgotten or destroyed

In this fast-paced world, people use special transponders to blow through highway toll stations without stopping and pay for gas without having to swipe a credit card. Then there are those cards you present at the grocery store for discounts. All have technology that can be used to track your movements and habits, right down to the time of day you typically go through a toll plaza each morning on the drive to work.
add RFID chips, the Real ID Act and the PASS Act to the list as well. How about chips in passports? We’re lulled into a false sense of security and people aren’t realizing that they are simply giving those rights to privacy away.

GPS navigation used to be a luxury item. Now most of us use the technology. It’s relatively inexpensive to buy a GPS device that’s bolted to the dashboard. Higher-end cars come with built-in GPS. And there are plenty of free navigation apps available for the BlackBerry and iPhone. The flip side to fewer people getting lost is that the providers of those systems can track your whereabouts without breaking a sweat

Here’s one you may not have seen coming. The increasingly popular Kindle allows us to tear through books on the go. But the device also “keeps track of what you read, how quickly you read it, what you may have read over several times, and can delete content you’ve paid for without your knowledge should it become ‘necessary

An important reason why privacy matters is not having to explain or justify oneself. We may do a lot of things which, if judged from afar by others lacking complete knowledge or understanding, may seem odd or
embarrassing or worse. It can be a heavy burden if we constantly have to wonder how everything we do will be perceived by others and have to be at the ready to explain.

Hence we must be educated about the sensitivity of their private data, we must know with whom our data is shared, which information is shared , when and purpose of collecting information .

Virendra Anjana
Virendra Anjana
8 years ago
Reply to  Jyoti Singh

so glass room, social media willing to share, google why it knows what it knows, gps, tracking movements, aadhar, legislation, SC recognized right to privacy

well written

worldlywise
worldlywise
8 years ago

ESSAY
1. Humility is not cowardice. Meekness is not weakness.
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Virendra Anjana
Virendra Anjana
8 years ago
Reply to  worldlywise

legs burrowed deep and head touching clouds.
write more

Mrityunjay Sharma
Mrityunjay Sharma
8 years ago

Humility is not cowardice. Meekness is not weakness.

The topic strikes at the core of human values with respect to how we humans, as a race over the years have viewed and valued various attributes such as Humility and Meekness. Human values though are quite transitionary with the given times, they are often by larger societies broadly categorised as desirable and non-desirable or atleast the perception of it, even if not explicitly worded.

Humility as a word has broadly come to represent a trait where somebody lets the work/inherent quality speak for themselves rather than him explicitly wording the greatness of it at every possible opportunity. Meekness on the other hand represents somebody who is more quiet, submissive and patient.

The Human values or attributes of Humility and Meekness have travelled a long distance in the past and had various dimensions and views to it. The act of kings disguising as monks and going out to assess the mood of the Public or them bowing down to the elderly and religious saints can be said to fall in the category of Humility. Such acts though were highly appreciated and lauded by the subjects then and by the readers of history as the sign of a good King now. On the other hand ambitious and successful kings with huge empires like Aurangzeb never earned such respect in history for their sheer arrogance. The Great king Ashoka’s denouncement of violence after enlightenment and working for the welfare of people could be another example of humility of accepting what was wrong and working on correcting the past mistakes. Such an act needs a lot of courage and specially when it’s a public acceptance of one being wrong all the time. However it can be the farthest possible from cowardice.

Meekness similarly is a trait which is contextual and has to be seen in the light of what and when. It can’t be generalised as a sign of weakness since History shows us various examples when it wasn’t. Gandhi Ji’s acts of truth and non-violence might be categorised by many as meekness but never can it be termed as weakness, since it were the same values which helped an entire generation of nationalists won independence for the country. The same could be said for Martin Luther King Jr’s march for peace and end of racial discrimination.

Humility as a trait in the Indian culture specifically always been lauded and people with such quality often respected by one and all. There are examples galore ranging from Lal Bahadur Shastri to Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam to Rahul Dravid. Humility is often seen in the Indian context as having one’s feet on the ground while one might have achieved great things in life. An often heard advice by the elders would be: “Don’t let success get into your head and failure to your Heart”. Humility thus is more representative of a virtue which represents a pinnacle of successful individual’s personality.

Meekness similarly is not just a representation of quietly accepting things and situation but a part of rather larger response to the situation or merely one’s way to register their opinion in a more patient and subtle manner. There are examples again from the Indian current context who might look Meek by the virtue of their soft spoken nature or patience but can seldom be categorised as weak. Irom Sharmila or Anna Hazare might look like petite figures which have a very accommodating stance but their way of protest to things might be much more stronger than even the loudest on the scene.

Even in the international arena, where relations between nations are much more complex and decided by multiple factors and stakeholders simultaneously, one can never always be on the offensive. The most recent example of the logjam at the Doklam plateau where India as well as China showed a lot of restraint inspite of the all heated commentary and views, it is only patience and dialogue which has been helpful in keeping the situation under control. A restrain on the statements urging for peace than conflict here was beneficial for both and might be the best way forward than any other more aggressive stance.

Similar parallels can be extended to the most famous academicians, scientists and Nobel prize winners of our generation who more often than not share the trait of humility and in many cases might turn out to be meek at a superficial look. The examples range from Kailash Satyarthi to Md. Yunus to R Venkatramnana.

Though such examples and cross section of History does make us think as Humility and Meekness to be most valued virtues it isn’t absolute and without exceptions. This is especially true in the case of today’s faced paced, multidimensional and web connected world. The social networks such as Facebook and Instagram which flourish on the theory that Human beings love attention make us rethink the previous hypothesis on Humility and Meekness. A large part of people’s success these days is determined by how famous and connected they are on the social networks. If an artist makes a video and uploads it, his success is determined by the number of likes and shares he gets on the video. This definitely has democratised the entire process of content creation and sharing but also invariably pushes people to be at the top of their voice in asking and nudging people to know them and follow what they do.

While this can also be contested by examples such as Salman Khan whose educational videos got viral and famous just by the sheer quality of content and without any advertising, a large part of the web doesn’t give us the same picture.

So, while Humility and Meekness earlier relied on the inherent qualities and beauty of the content to speak for itself, a lot of it, given the advent of social media has turned into pushing and marketing the individual for the fear of not getting left behind.

Does this mean that we have no longer Humility and Meekness as traits as they were seen earlier and have they become irrelevant in the current context. I would refrain from making that conclusion. This is because the mediums and ways of doing things might change for the change in technology and the way consumers/people want things these days; the inherent traits of people can’t be defined merely by the way they conduct themselves online. There is lot to one than just their online persona.

Thus while Humility and Meekness might change their representations and how people view them in the light of a specific situation, to categorise them as what the statement says; which is Humility as cowardice and Meekness as weakness would be the most inappropriate generalisation ever to have been done regarding the most basic of Human trait, the trait of a species which itself is so varied across places, across generations and across it’s views on different issues.

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