Instructions: Write an essay on any one of the following in about 1000-1200 words.
Time : 90 minutes
Marks : 125
1. Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.
2. It is during our darkest moments that we must focus to see the light.





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Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world
Quoted by Nelson Mandela, It shows the impact of education. But what is education? Is it just going to school and learning maths and sciences? Or Is it reading religious scriptures? No, education is way beyond that. It is a means to empower your brains, to think critically and rationally, and apply this to real life problems so as to make world better place to live in. It is the ability to question. Swami Vivekananda said, do not believe a thing written in text or just because someone said. Believe it only when it satisfies your intellect. It is this ability to question which has the potential to change the world.
Dr. kalam said, “If you are blessed with intelligence and empowered with education, then it is your responsibility to change the world”
A clear manifestation of this can be seen from history when Dr.Raja Ram Mohan Roy fought for sati by questioning religious preachers based upon his knowledge of religious scriptures. Later, other social reformers took inspiration from Roy’s working style and fought for widow remarriage and women education.
Infact, Swami Vivekananda criticized Indians for stagnate minds. He believed that a country can prosper only with minds which are progressive. This means Education not only involves learning, but it also involves un-learning and re-learning. E.g. It was a common practice in past where different hookahs were maintained for different castes which could not be shared. Same practice was observed by Vivekananda ji in his childhood in his father’s office. He questioned his father about why not only 1 hookah? He didn’t get any satisfactory answer so he tried smoking from all of them and realized all tasted same. So this was the moment, when he unlearnt the practice of untouchability and re-learned that he should fight for equality. Thus, it was education which gave him the capability to question his surroundings and then strive for changing the norms.
Similarly we had Mahatma Gandhi, Gautam Buddha, Nelson Mandela, Malala Yousufzai, and other innumerable names who contributed their bit to the society so as to improve the world.
But, we do see a lot of problems plaguing our society like terrorism, pollution, garbage collection, forest degradation, climate change, nuclear arsenal proliferation, social discrimination etc which needs actions and leadership from educated minds.
Only an educated mind can realize that LGBTQ community is also human community and they should be given their basic rights, environmental damage is disaster in making and requires quick actions etc
But we find ourselves in a paradoxical situation where we know education is the most important weapon to change the world, but we haven’t worked on educational reforms an our education system promotes rote learning than practical application. Also, the education system continues to be exclusionary in qualitative terms, inspite of achieving near universal primary school enrollment. Lack of money transforms into lack of education and leads to perpetration of poverty.
Srinivas Ramanujan was great mathematician who had just one maths book and it was enough for him to create mathematical Equations. But, not every child is so intellectually blessed and needs support for growth. This support system continues to be discriminatory and hence, no one knows how many Ramanujan are lost in their poverty.
Therefore, It was human intellect which led to colonization, degradation of forests, accumulation of plastics, untouchability etc but it is also the same human mind empowered with edcation which seeks solution to these problems and thus, it is education which is the weapon to change the world.
Nicely written.
Some good points – Hookah story, LGBTQ, education paradox ….
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Hi.. nice essay..
my observations.. You could have added dimension of India, what it has done understanding the QUOTE in terms of quality of educaiton, Right of education and values of education…. (as India has admired Nelson mandela the most)……
Further Why is Education needed … you have added dimensions of education paradox…. but I feel you have to touch upon the aspects of … POST TRUTH ERA, FAKE NEWS, PAID NEWS, SOCIAL MEDIA…especially in today’s RIGHT WING Governments…
Some sort of way forward… UN resolutions.. Malala yousufzai works…. could have been given at the end.. to have some practical solution in realizing the importance of education in changing world order…
(my views.. can be incorrect also…)
kindly review mine… keep writing… 🙂
Good Review.While Writing Essay We Have To Cover Multiple Dimension As You Said…..!!!
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Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world—
As the world today is plagued by hatred, inequality & violence, education can be a great leveller. Education can enlighten the world and show people the true potential of sharing knowledge and fostering collaboration which will eventually pave the way for world peace and The context in which is the word WEAPON is used for education is something which builds change, something that can influence society positively, strongly and effectively.
This is a very THOUGHT PROVOKING statement by one of the greatest leaders of the world who despite all odds fought against APARTHEID in South Africa. What he essentially means is that if everyone has access to quality education it will empower people and create a better society and a new world order which no nuclear arsenal can ever hope to achieve.
WITH GUNS A MAN CAN KILL TERRORISTS BUT WITH EDUCATION A MAN CAN KILL TERRORISM.
Literacy gives a person skills and education will direct a person to doing right things, enable a sense of discernment, guide consciousness towards progress and give a person inner strength. A man who is truly educated will exhibit strength of character. Often it is only, when one is educated that one can withstand the vicissitudes, the ups and downs of life.
Even from the point of view of the national income, an educated working person contributes more to the economy of a nation than an uneducated worker. A higher education gives an individual more bargaining power.
Studies have shown that countries with a greater level of education witness a higher increase in their PER CAPITAL INCOME.
Literacy for women is Also very important. A woman should know her rights as a citizen. A Sanskrit proverb says that if you educate a man, you educate one person, but if you educate a woman, you educate the entire family; the entire neighborhood, and the entire country. Some parents don’t feel the need to educate their daughters, and spend the money on educating their sons instead. This is a wrong approach; it is equally important to educate all children equally
Education doesn’t just mean getting degrees or going to university. A person could be home schooled, yet be highly educated. The power to reason, the ability to make a correct judgments, the ability to discern, the capacity to be open minded, the capacity to be kind and compassionate to the lesser fortunate ones are all traits of a cultured educated man. It is an ongoing and an evolving process, which each of us who are fortunate to have got at a basic level, should try to constantly be aware of and utilize its learnings in daily life.
An Educated Society can hence prove to be a potent instrument to tackle the current issues prevalent across the world. Social crimes like FEAMALE INFANTICIDES,DOMESTIC VIOLENCE,THEFT,DOWRY,ALCOHOL ABUSE and many more will get exponentially decreased when every child starts getting educated properly from the very beginning itself.It can help people rise above RELIGION,CASTE,CREED & ETHNICITY.
A child who is educated enough to have learnt the difference between right and wrong, have enough knowledge and is sufficiently wise will not become:-
>>A terrorist in-spite of he being a Muslim because he can read what Quran has to say and not believe in false statements which their leaders tell them to blindly believe upon.
>>A beggar because in-spite of his poverty he knows different ways in which he can earn and live a happy, successful and contented life.
>>Superstitious because he is educated enough to understand why and why not a thing is happening
Thus education has assumed a greater significance in the social upliftment of the masses and the downtrodden oppressive people. Education can help eradicate the fear & doubt from the minds of the people and empower them to bring a change or start a revolution. It can help open up the minds of the people which otherwise is shrouded by the clouds of preconceived notions & perceptions.
Another positive impact that education can have is on the environment. A UNESCO study has shown that with improving knowledge & literacy levels, people tend to effectively use the NATURAL RESOURCRS and become more conscious & responsible towards their consumption of natural resources. This helps in improving the environmental sustainability & conservation. This will help the world tackle the myriad problems of pollution and depletion of natural resources
Apart from social upliftment, education can help people improve their socio-economic standards by creating more job opportunities and enhancing the skilled manpower pool. A clear correlation exists between literacy & economic growth of a country with increase in literacy rate improving the overall economic growth as it helps improve the overall living standards and social expenditure.
Despite all this,The current schooling systems need a radical revolution. With the advent of technology,students need to have access to all the information they want within the reach of their fingertips hence the importance of critical thinking comes above all. Since the traditional school methods have been replaced with modern approaches people have changed the way they think,act,and feel and this has definitely impacted the world as a whole.
GIVE A MAN FISH AND YOU FEED HIM FOR A DAY,TEACH A MAN TO FISH AND YOU FEED HIM FOR A LIFETIME
There is absolutely no doubt ,indeed good education is the strongest and most effective weapon to solve many of the problems ranging from family problems to global issues.
The above proverb clearly indicates ,If the knowledge is implemented in an appropriate way, then definitely world would be the most beautiful place to live in
To sum up, education thus assumes a significant importance as it can bring about a revolutionary change and make the world a better place to live.“Let us remember: One book, one pen, one child, and one teacher can change the world.
I guess your essay is adapted from here http://essayonquotes.com/essay-quote-education-powerful-weapon-can-use-change-world. But anyways , its a good attempt as you have written other dimensions also.
What ….?????
I salute your consistency in answer writing.
Nice flow in essay.. you can add some successful examples from past like Swami Vivekanand, Gopal Krishan Gokhale, Sarvepalli Radhakrishnan, Savitri Bai Phule and their contribution in changing the society through education.
Focus on value education viz Honesty, Integrity, empathy, compassion, social harmony can help in change the world.
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Well structured essay
Good use of proverbs and educated vs. uneducated !
Keep writing
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Good use of recent events – child labour, syria, swachh bharat
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Nice essay… you could have used your intro in the middle of the essay.. as i felt that it was more speaking out of the topic given… you could have added some more points of World issues (though Syrian crisis you did mention).. Climate change.. Neo-nationalism.. post truth.. fake news… hatred among communities… all should have been touched ( as per my knowledge)… Conclusion was nice…
keep writing.. kindly review mine please… 🙂
I agree i should have also touched upon neo nationalism and fake news , thank you for your feedback 🙂
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Burn the candle and darkness will be out of the room. Education is like a candle, burn it in your life and all the miseries and darkness will be gone. But remember, as a candle burns in a rhythm, slowly and intended to lighten the room, our education should be progressive, subtle and meaningful. Uncontrolled flame of candle may put the complete house into flame, in the same way, a bundle of distorted education may erode the personal and societal values and may reduce the whole mankind to the travesty of learning and knowledge.
This year I have not joined any Test Series, So peer review is badly needed.
Thanks in advance guys
Topic : Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world
See,I Have To Be A Little Critical Here So That You Can Improve.
>>Intoduction Is Not Impactful
>>Need To Cover More Multiple Dimension i e How One Can Be Educated If He/She Is Not Degree Holder,Difference Between Educated or Uneducated Person etc.and Its Impact.
>>Needs To Work On Sentence Framing and Structure.
Content Is Good,Handwriting Bhi Achchi,It Is Visible What You Have Written and Some Eminent Personalities Like Rajaram Mohun Roy or Mahatma Gandhi Is Liking Icing On The Cake.
Overall It Is Nice Piece To Read.
Keep Learning and Keep Growing…..!!!
Thanks 🙂
Will try to improve
content is good but like jyoti has suggested you need to cover multiple dimensions such as
why change is needed
why is education the best way
is the education enough or does it have certain pitfalls
how to foster education
and so on. keep writing
your content is excellent but some dimensions like
1) why world needs change
2) why is education the best way to bring change as compared to others
could have further enriched your essay. keep writing
“Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world “,it is an speech quoted by Nelson Mandela on education. Yes, it is acceptable statement that all of us know about this. He relied education as a game changer of all because the power of the education imparted on human beings. Education guides and senses the leaners with knowledge which he might faced the problems as it is not simply a poems or imagination or friction. Education is the complilation from experience with analysis from different angles on different subjects given by the different philosophists. This can made the learners to think before he or she acts in a helpful manner. Through this ideas one can change the world through evolution of freedom of knowledge such as liberty, freedom, equality ,fraternity and development.With the rise of renaissance in the west specially in french revolution,the idea of liberty and equality came to the world and this wake up the world that “All men are equal before law .” Based on this, the world today we lived are formed which our gOvt protects all of us with the same dignity given by the law.With this same ideas, Indian constitution removed untouchabity and declared one man ,one vote system .And the most reliable change is the apartheid in South Africa later on UN and world leaders excepted it on the world platform. Ultimately,the world recognised all men are equal irrespective of race, color and wealth. Through this idea of knowledge the world has not transformed not only equality between races but the gender as well.Nowadays, women are not subjugated under male they are entitled with equal laws pars with men. The importance of women has increased as it has sayings that the education of men is one but women education is the education of the whole family. Education brought everything change for all with the change of time because education is dynamic.
Hence, through education ,it can help the learners to adapt the change that happenings around him or her. Education became the analysis of knowledge relevant with today ‘s psychology and ethics and this allow the new evolution of thoughts that had never occurred before. Eg, recently SC banned the instant tripple talaq and recognised of marital rape as crime against women from the analysis of Hindu marriage Act. India change many of laws that was formed in the formation of Indian constitution as it is not reliabled as of today technological world. This is through education ,our constitution makers can cope many dangerous situations .
Education abled to change the world because it changes a society and it changes a man that formed the society and abled to maintain the peace, harmony and tranquility of a man. As sayings from Gandhiji ,”education means all round drawing out of the best in child and man -body mind and spirit. “And he also said that “education becomes the basis of personality development in all dimenision -moral, mental and emotional “. Gandhi opinion is that education is the responsible for it’s outcomes .It is because from the education, the learners gets all reliable knowledge that he or she should response in a particular issue from different sources even from opposite suggestions and digest through perceptions and this guide and controls the mind ,soul and spirit. In such a situation, he / she would not act like an uneducated person which lacks that particular issue. The great example for this was Mahatma Gandhi in which he took the advice of great man like Leo Tolstoy. And this was helpful in the Indian freedom struggle by waking up the sleep Indians under the British policy.
Though education change the world. The question is why the world has not the solution for all the current problems like turmoil in West Asia, climate change and it’s threats rohinhgyas issues and fundamentalism of Islam. It is not because of the lack of education but the lack of morality and love. Here, it is not related with education at all. Why the most developed US would relied for world politics and against China and north Korea is questionable to all? The fights between India and Pakistan, North Korea and south Korea and the issue of the common but differianted responsibilities in climate change are not related with education but related with” own cost protection “. Such factors is responsible by subjects like economists which subjected for profit motive ,a part of education.In education ,there can’t be relate with the peace preached by Buddha and Mahavira that can change the world through the love, peace and non violence.however, in the present world all the diplomatics relations are economists.moreover, the situation is worsened by the development of science and development as there has been increased of treats to man kind including nuclear war. The great example is the heroisma and nagasaki nuclear bombing.
At last of all,we can’t leave education, it is the game changer of all .however, education should be used in proper way according to do and don’t that generally accepted in all until then education can change the world according to Mandela.
Friends…I am very late but please review if you get time. …