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Following are today’s Mains Marathon Questions.
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Questions
1) The draft national policy for persons with disabilities represents a shift from a medical model of disability to a social or human rights model of disability, however, inclusiveness and empowerment cannot be achieved without political inclusion. Discuss and also highlight the hurdles to political empowerment of the disabled.
2) Highlight multidimensional implications of Forest Conservation Rules, 2022.
Great Answer! In terms of coverage, awesome, all points have been covered. Structure and flow are also good.
Only suggestion is to use smaller sentences/cut unnecessary words, answer seems to have exceeded the word limit e.g., there is no need to mention that Ministry has invited comments from the public on the policy. Similarly the aspect of voting can be mentioned in 1-2 lines that ‘Despite legal provisions under PWD Act, PwDs face lack of physical accessibility like absence of ramps or braille-enabled EVMs’.
Word and time limit are crucial, try to perfect your expression adhering to the limits.
Keep writing 🙂
First time here, the 3rd page is the 2nd
Please review it.
Excellent answer! Nothing much to suggest. Perhaps could have mentioned the Act under which the rules were formulated. Keep a check on the word limit. All else seems perfect.
Keep writing 🙂
Your answer is good . Can u tell me where did u got these points ?
Thanks for appreciation. After reading article, i am trying to connect it with the theme of the question. I am trying to incorporating all socio-economic, political, cultural aspect. You can divide introduction according to question like definition, data, current debate or past event of the topic etc. I am preparing current issues according to subtopics of GS. Last but not the least try to analyze the answer copy of toppers for better understanding where you will get an idea how to proceed according to the demand of the question. We can connect on email if wish to do so.
Thank u for your reply . Also for ur valuable info
Welcome.
Review please.Let me know my mistakes.
Good attempt! Nice handwriting, easily readable, proper headings/sub-headings. Keep it up.
However, there is scope of improvement in content. You have focused only on the structural aspect of changes (like committees etc.) Instead try to address the core concern which is doing away with the consent of the tribal dwellers which was mandated by the FRA, 2006. Then discuss the implications for all stakeholders.
Refer to Radha’s answer for her approach. You’ll get a better idea.
Keep writing 🙂
Thank you for the review. Its my first answer here. I will improve it.
Please review it.
Great Answer!
Only 1 issue I found was repetition of the lack of political participation, it is in the introduction and then again after the need for Policy. Ideally, You could have avoided it in the introduction part. Rest all so good.
Plz review it