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Following are today’s Mains Marathon Questions.
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Questions
Highlight the significance of the National Curriculum Framework for Foundational Stage (NCF-FS) for education and the overall well-being of children.
Discuss the challenges in making the entertainment industry more inclusive for persons with disabilities. What are the provisions available for this objective?
Good answer! Content is largely adequate, slight modification can be done in structure. First mention briefly the objective of NEP (show the 5+3+3+4 framework through a diagram). Highlight the significance of Foundational learning, and then mention significance of NCF in achieving the objectives. Your content contains all these points, just restructuring is required.
Thank you, i will work on the structure part
Please review and let me know my mistakes
Great answer! Maybe can include a small diagram showing 5+3+3+4 system with significance of foundational learning. Overall nice!
Right! I’ll add that. Thanku for the review
Good answer! The main body content is all good. Slight improvement is possible in the introduction. You have used some generic sentences, instead You can briefly mention objectives of NEP and then link it with NCF for foundational stage. Or You can also mention the importance of foundational learning and link it with NCF.
Rest is good.
Thank you for review. I’ll work on suggestions
Answer is great in terms of content. However, You still seem to be ignoring the importance of word limit. As an example you can rephrase the producers’ concern like this
– Providing subtitles/audio description with the movie is expensive. The absence of large market makes their provisioning financially unviable. (19 words).
You have used 43 words for the same point.
Be brief, this will help in completing the paper.
Thank you for the review, but I have written the answer keeping in mind that it is a 15 marks (250 words) question.